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~ Greetings

~ Deeply impressed by The Thin Red Line

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~ The movie is heart breaking

~ The story is about a few American soldiers in the WWII

~ The soldiers are against their will wars

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~ The movie was filmed with a good group of crews

~ Good director, cinematography, art direction, costumes, film editing, sound editing, visual effects and music

~ Cannot miss it!

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~ Give reasons for its worth watching

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~ The writer accuses the Americans entering the war

~ Why do we need to start a war?

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~ The movie shows peace

~ Peace is a free gift from nature but sometimes it will be taken away

~ We have to pay much for wars

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~ The director does not take side of his nation

~ The movie does not support American or Japanese

~ Both Japanese and Americans are cruel

~ His film can inspire everyone

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~ Movie shows human relationship

~ Soldiers help one another

~ Love appears in everyone¡¦s ear

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~ The music is great

~ It is worth watching

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~ The movie is a good production

~ It tells us the war and peace, destiny and faith

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