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~ Greetings
~ Deeply impressed by
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~ The movie is heart breaking
~ The story is about a few American soldiers in the WWII
~ The soldiers are against their will wars
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~ The movie was filmed with a good group of crews
~ Good director, cinematography, art direction, costumes, film editing, sound editing, visual effects and music
~ Cannot miss it!
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~ Give reasons for its worth watching
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~ The writer accuses the Americans entering the war
~ Why do we need to start a war?
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~ The movie shows peace
~ Peace is a free gift from nature but sometimes it will be taken away
~ We have to pay much for wars
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~ The director does not take side of his nation
~ The movie does not support American or Japanese
~ Both Japanese and Americans are cruel
~ His film can inspire everyone
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~ Movie shows human relationship
~ Soldiers help one another
~ Love appears in everyone
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~ The music is great
~ It is worth watching
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~ The movie is a good production
~ It tells us the war and peace, destiny and faith
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