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~ Non-academic areas are always neglected by Hong Kong and leads to a huge loss of talented people.

~ Some universities admitted students due to their achievements in non-academic subjects

~ In this essay, I am going to discuss the pros and cons of the admission policy and air my own opinion towards it.

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~ The new admission policy can foster talent

~ For those who were talented in non-academic fields could not be admitted to an university

~ It was a great loss of talents

~ Some gave up their talented fields in order to concentrate on their study

~ The old admission policy completely blocked their roads to success

~ It will not only benefit individuals, but also Hong Kong

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~ The new admission policy will enhance the importance of non-academic areas

~ People will realize the importance of them and begin to develop them

~ The new admission policy can encourage a correct idea towards education and help for more prominent and constructive persons to society

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~ There is the other side of a coin

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~ The general academic level will decline

~ Those who are only good at non-academic fields may not be able to choose a suitable subject for them

~ They will find difficulties in handling those subjects and suffer

~ The overall standard of university will then decline ~ The credibility of university education will then be doubtful

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~ The new admission policy will spread the idea of neglecting academic subjects

~ Some ignoramuses will then neglect academic subjects

~ As they have less intention to develop on their academic knowledge, the general level of academic subjects of Hong Kong will then be lowered

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~ The new admission policy brings both advantages and disadvantages to individuals as well as society

~ It is a good one. It can foster talented people on non-academic fields, which have been neglected

~ However, the number of such an entry should not be over expanded

~ Actually, the status of colleges of music, sports, and so on should be enhanced

~ Non-academic colleges can provide professional education with high reputation from the eyes of Hong Kong people

~ Hong Kong can then become a comprehensive renowned city in the world!