Outline
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A lot of people live under the poverty line.
- The gap between rich and poor is wide.
- Examine the cause and the solutions to the problem.
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- Introduce examples and give reasons for poverty.
- Some countries are lacking in resources
- Wealth is unevenly distributed
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- War is one of the reasons for poverty
- The government collects heavy tax for weapons to fight against enemies
- People have to pay for the reconstruction after the war
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- In addition to wars, many countries ignore the importance of education
- Children are pillars
- We have to put ample resources in education
- Poor technology is another factor of poverty
- More money can be earned from using hi-tech production method
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- The cause of the poverty---Natural disasters
- Example: typhoon
- Result: to spend piles of banknotes to rebuild all things up.
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- The solution to solve poverty
- Maintain peace through negotiation
- Put more money and effort into educational field and improve the living standard of the poor countries.
-This can be done by charity
Conclusion
-we should give a hand to the poor countries
-This country should find out their own problems and tackle them with a long-term solution.
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